Sitting inside, at this dark corner and
lamenting!
What prevents you from coming out of it?
Do you like to remain in dark, away from light?
Or the darkness wishes to be with you?
Turn your head from darkness to find
light
Haven’t you seen the light at the gap of
the window pane?
What prevents you from standing on your
own?
Is it your legs or the lazy heart
whispers to remain in dark?
Assumptions and accusing never going to
help you
There is always a path to walk better,
just plan
Inhibitions aren’t going to feed you,
wipe it out!
There is always a place in your heart,
never lose hope.
Look at the endless sky, it is amazing
isn’t it?
The blue sky, the red sky: as it is
nature’s order
Look at the birds, flying high in the
sky
How lovely they are, with no worry they
soar high.
Go out to find your resources, life has
its riches.
Never stop learning, because it’s
continuous!
Ideal mind never encourages being idle!
Drive darkness; turn your head towards
the light!
A poem by Ayubkhan.U
26 comments:
what a nice article. completely love it
I quite like the poem.. the imagery that comes to mind on reading this poem is simply marvelous!
I love it :)
Lovely! (:
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Very Nice i love it.... :)
I enjoyed reading this. Many questions. You work with free verse well.
Fantastic. I would like to feature this on my blog if you don't mind. And thanks for the lovely invite, that was really very sweet of you xxx
Beautiful!
I like the poem. It has a lot of ideas going on, a lot of places for someone to stop and think. Great job. Thank you for sharing it with me.
the time to stop is when you close your eyes to death. live life to the fullest and just enjoy dealing with it. its part of one's journey to walk with it's own life. love the last two stanza of the poem by the way. kudos. :D
Hi Ayub,
...turn your head towards the light!
Lovely poem!
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i think that it is really inspiring ayub,,
nice poem and keep inspiring
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nice effort dear its really good
Hmmm ....... evocative poetry. I agree!, Still not going to give nothing but emptiness. Begin to act is the best way. There is always a bright light beam path and in the dark for anyone who seeks it.
I like it! It is true, after the darkness there will be light. Have hope it will all go well.
Great read!
Look at the sky, life has it's riches!
Lovely poem! Full of positivity!
Spread the joy! Keep it up!
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Nice. But I have a different take on darkness. Sometimes, it is nurturing. It's not something that you need to run from. It something that gives you space to think, wings to spread, colors to paint. Just my view. Well written!
Cheers!
Its great :) Superb one :)
Hi friend,I read it completely.It shows your feelings and I am sure you are very emotional and kind.Please go on your efforts .You will be successful in your major.I cross my fingers for you.
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Luvly poem!! :D :D
Inspirational...great job!
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